We
all know that well-written copy is one of the most highly effective
methods of getting people's attention and attracting them to
your product or service… but the importance of the shortest
copy is often overlooked. A lot of people don't even realize
that things like their navigation menus, links, or even their
newsletter subscription offers ARE copy and require
careful consideration.
Ironically, this
kind of copy is one of the most valuable tools you have. Think
about your…
- Banners
- Classified ads
- Newsletter subscription
offers
- Navigation menus
- Links ("click
here," "buy now")
This sort of copy
is typically asking people to take some sort of action that
is vital to your business: visit your web site, request more
info, subscribe to your newsletter, click through, buy the product…
which is why it requires so much more attention than it tends
to receive.
Of course it's
more difficult to get your message across when you have limited
space, but short copy is the glue that holds your marketing
campaign together. And if every button on your menu,
every ad, every link isn't as absolutely compelling and effective
as it can be, you're not going to get the results you're hoping
for, be it more sales, more subscriptions, more referrals, etc...
So I'm going to
show you four Hard and Fast Rules of copywriting
that must be followed in even the shortest of copy to guarantee
you always make the most profitable use of the little space
you have.
Hard
and Fast Rule #1: You MUST emphasize benefits, not features
I know, I know,
you've heard this one before. But I so often see copy -- short
and long -- that neglects to mention how the features
of a product or service will benefit customers that I'm guessing
a good number of you aren't sure what this really means. So
let me clarify for you…
- A FEATURE
is one of the components or functions of your product or service.
For example, if your toothbrushes come packaged with glow-in-the-dark
toothpaste, that's a feature -- not a benefit.
- A BENEFIT
is something your product or service will do for your buyer
to somehow offer a solution to a problem. So if your toothbrushes
that come with glow-in-the-dark toothpaste make stubborn kids
thrilled to brush their teeth before they go to bed, then
you've got yourself a benefit!
Are you following
me? An online real estate agent advertising "real-time
mortgage calculations" is advertising a feature of her
site; however, if she writes, "Avoid wasting time haggling
at the bank with my real-time mortgage calculator,"
then she's advertising a benefit.
Emphasizing benefits
is the number-one most overlooked rule of copywriting,
and this lack of emphasis is one of the top reasons advertising
falls flat. Short copy is no exception -- and you don't need
a lot of room to do it right.
Let's take a look
at a short classified ad. If you posted an ad that read:
Real estate
on the Internet.
Plenty of listings.
Shop at your convenience.
…you probably
wouldn't get the greatest response. The ad is brief and to the
point, but it lacks clarity. First of all, what kind of property
is being advertised? Are the listings for commercial buildings
or family homes? What part of the world does the ad refer to?
How many listings is "plenty"? How do we get to see
these listings? And, most important, how does this service benefit
me?
There is a vague
reference to the benefit of "convenience" in this
ad -- but it's not really explained. Let's dress it up a bit:
Take
a Personal Tour of 375+ of Seattle's Hottest,
Most Affordable Single-Family Homes
Skip the
hassles of house hunting when you search our HUGE online
database of single-family homes:
- 375+ homes
with pictures, video tours, and detailed descriptions!
- Search
by price, location, number of bedrooms, number of bathrooms,
and more!
- Get FREE
local school reports, neighborhood information, and
mortgage calculations!
Click
here now to begin searching our online
database of Seattle's hottest, most affordable family
homes -- without leaving your computer! |
This version expands
on the benefit of convenience and details the different ways
this convenience offers solutions to the house-hunter's
problems. So the benefits we're clarifying for the reader
are:
- House hunting
is a hassle and now you can avoid it.
- Physically
going to see 375 homes would be practically impossible but
you can easily do it online.
- You can search
the database by very specific criteria to effortlessly find
exactly what you want.
- Plus you'll
get free reports that detail all the information you'll want
to know about a new home and neighborhood that you wouldn't
get even if you went there in person.
Also note that
this ad targets a specific niche: single-family home buyers
in the Seattle area. Targeting your advertising is the only
way to get your benefits in front of your best potential customers,
as we'll discover in the next section...
Hard and Fast Rule #2: You MUST write to a targeted audience
The fact is, your
product or service is just not going to appeal to everyone.
And if you try to market it to everyone, you'll wind up with
far fewer sales than if you choose a select group to direct
your copy to. So once you've defined your target market, you
need to turn your attention toward making sure your copy addresses
them directly.
For example, let's
look at pay-per-click advertising. Let's say you bid 17 cents
per click in Overture.com for the key phrase "single-family
homes." Because you pay every time someone clicks through
this link, whether they purchase from you or not, you want to
make sure that your ad carefully targets your best potential
customers.
Given that you're
targeting single-family home buyers in the Seattle area, you'd
want to make sure your ad includes this vital piece of information.
That way, you can be sure you won't waste money on people searching
for single-family homes in San Diego!
And if you bid
41 cents per click for the key phrase "Seattle homes,"
you'd want to make sure to write an ad that clearly states that
your site features single-family homes... so you don't waste
your advertising dollars on condo-seekers or recreational property
buyers.
By writing a separate
ad for each of your keywords that carefully targets your market,
you'll ensure that you attract the most buyers for the
least cost.
Of course, if you're
writing copy for banner ads, your approach will need to be a
bit different. Whether you're:
- Purchasing blocks
of impressions (i.e. you pay a set dollar amount for your
banner to be displayed 1,000... 10,000... etc... times on
other web sites), OR
- Participating
in a banner exchange (i.e. you're trading banner impressions
with a network of other site owners)
... you've paid
for your advertising up front, so you'll want to do everything
you can to attract viewers' attention and persuade them to click
through to your site. And this means you'll want your ad copy
to be a bit more general, to ensure it attracts the
highest number of click-throughs.
The title of the
above classified ad would make a great banner:
Take
a Personal Tour of 375+ of Seattle's Hottest, Most Affordable
Single-Family Homes! Click here
now... |
...You're targeting
your best potential customers! But you might also try testing
banners with more general copy that read something like this:
Search
HUGE online database of 375+ Seattle Dream Homes and skip
the house-hunting headaches! Click
here now... |
The first ad is
going to attract the most qualified audience -- those people
who are looking for a single-family home in Seattle for a reasonable
price. The second version, however, will attract a slightly
broader audience. Still in Seattle and still looking
for homes, this group is not necessarily looking for a single-family
dwelling, and they're not necessarily worried about price. They're
just checking out homes in the Seattle area and they're attracted
by the size and convenience of the online database.
While the first
ad may generate a higher visitor-to-sale conversion
rate (the percentage of people clicking through who
then sign up for the service) because it is more specific, the
second ad will probably solicit more click-throughs in total,
because it has a more general appeal. You'd have to test to
see which version would pull the most sign-ups altogether.
Hard
and Fast Rule #3: You MUST include a call to action
Okay, easy enough.
BUY NOW! There's a call to action.
But hold on a minute.
If it were that simple, everyone marketing online would be rich,
and every online shopper would have to move into a bigger home
to accommodate all that happily purchased stuff.
There are two very
important things that you must include in your call to action:
- You must determine
exactly what action you want people to take, and
- You must provide
a reason why people should take that action.
Isn't buy now
exactly the action you want? Not necessarily. Think about what
exactly it is that you are trying to do. Are you trying to generate
leads? Do you want people to sign up for your free newsletter?
Are you trying to attract a specific audience and hoping to
convert as many of those people as possible into sales?
It is important
to understand that ALL copy, if possible, should contain a call
to action that clearly identifies what action is desired. I
can't emphasize this enough.
Think about the
buttons on your site menu. Each one is a call to action! And
they are all very important! If they're not as direct as possible,
telling visitors specifically what to do, they will be useless.
For example, if
you have a button that is labeled "sales," you are
doing nothing but confusing your visitors, leaving them guessing
whether you are referring to product sales (i.e., online ordering),
products that are on sale (i.e., specials or discounts), or
maybe the opportunity to sell your product (i.e., merchandising
opportunities). But your visitors won't guess for long -- why
would they bother? They'll just leave your site.
If you change the
button copy from "sales" to "order online,"
you are now asking viewers to take an action -- to order your
product. This clarifies the purpose of the button and tells
the viewer what to do to get your product. Another example:
instead of writing "E-mail," you could ask your viewers
to "Contact Us" -- again, you're asking your visitors
to take a specific action!
Of course, you
will not always be able to include a call to action in every
button; you won't always have the space. Your best bet in this
case is to be as clear as possible.
For example, it
would be difficult to include a call to action in a button of
your navigation menu that leads to your newsletter back issues.
There would not be room to say "click here now to read
our newsletter back issues." So in this case, you'd just
want to make sure that your copy is clear. Label the button
"Newsletter Back Issues" instead of "More"
or "Old Stuff."
Now let's think
about your links. Supposing "buy now" is the action
you want… You have to give people a reason why they should
buy. Huge, garishly colored words on a screen won't do the trick;
added benefits will.
And in your links,
you have a little more room to move. The call to action should
remain the central focus of the link, but pack in as many benefits
as possible around it. Something like...
| "Click
here now to claim your 'Golfer's Guide
to the Green' and instantly receive the downloadable video
that features up-close-and-personal interviews with Pro
Golfers who reveal their hottest golfing secrets, guaranteed
to improve your game in 2 weeks or your money back!"
|
...will win out
every time over "Buy now."
Hard
and Fast Rule #4: You MUST pay attention to layout
Making the most
of your layout is especially important when you're writing short
copy. The right blend of emphasis and information is the best
way to attract viewers. Don't underestimate the effectiveness
of bolding, italics, underlining, color, and white space.
But don't overdo
it either!
For example, an
offer to subscribe to your newsletter must be brief, compelling,
and effective. It will not be the main feature of your
web page or anyone else's, so it must be attractive enough to
grab the attention of a distracted reader. But it also needs
to remain readable and informative, without a gross misuse of
formatting tricks.
If your ad has
too much going on in it, it will look unattractive, unappealing,
and unprofessional -- and the clutter will detract from the
meaning of your message.
On the other hand,
too little emphasis leaves you in danger of never catching anyone's
eye. If your ad is totally boring, no one will ever even see
it -- and if they somehow do, they probably won't look at it
long enough to find out what it's about.
So let's try to
find a happy medium, emphasizing without crowding….
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Catchy, effective,
and professional in appearance, this version draws your attention
and doesn't distract you from the information it contains once
you're there.
The ad is clearly
laid out and easy to read. The title is underlined and in blue,
as is the link. This is the standard way to handle links, and
it lets the viewers know they can link to the sign-up page from
either place. Giving readers two chances to link through
to your sign-up will always work better than one. (And
never have any blue, underlined text that is not a link!)
I've used only
subtle formatting tricks to provide emphasis while keeping the
ad visually appealing. The title of the newsletter is in quotation
marks to give it additional emphasis. The main features of the
newsletter -- what you'll learn from the experts -- are emphasized
by the use of bullet points and a nice amount of white space.
And the main benefits of the newsletter -- reduce your expenses
and dramatically increase your annual income -- are italicized
and strategically placed right before the call to action.
Because the call
to action comes at the end of the ad, it is supported
by all that came before it. And because it is the last bit of
text and it is in blue, the viewer's eye is effectively drawn
through the ad after being attracted by the title.
Of course, some
of the formatting techniques discussed here are available only
to people formatting their ads in HTML. Obviously, you have
more options in HTML and can do pretty much whatever you like.
But in text format, you don't have the choice of adding color,
bold, italics, etc. You DO, however, have the ability to use
characters, spacing, capitalization, and indentation for effect.
So if we had to
format our ad in text, it might look like this:
==================================================
"FREE Subscription to 'Potato Farmer's' Newsletter"
Subscribe today
and on the first Tuesday of each month
you'll receive tips and strategies from INDUSTRY LEADERS
who'll reveal...
Secrets for selling
your crops for the HIGHEST PROFITS!
Tricks for cutting
down the time you spend in the field!
Cost-effective strategies for TRIPLING YOUR CROP YIELD!
Plus much, much more!
Each issue contains tons of easy-to-implement techniques, guaranteed
to REDUCE YOUR EXPENSES while dramatically
INCREASING YOUR ANNUAL INCOME!
Visit http://www.PotatoFarmers.com
to subscribe!
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Because we don't
have the option of hyperlinking the text, effectively highlighting
it in blue, I've moved the capitalized "FREE" to the
beginning of the title to attract attention. I've also enclosed
the headline in quotation marks for emphasis, and put the newsletter
title in single quotes (which should always be used inside double
quotes).
I've capitalized
the benefits that were italicized in the HTML version along
with a few more benefits to make the ad as eye-catching as possible.
The general rule in text is to capitalize whatever you would
have bolded or italicized in HTML, but be careful with your
use of caps -- they're difficult to read if used excessively.
Final
Thoughts:
So now that you
know the secrets of fitting high-impact copy into small spaces,
I'll let you in on another little secret… there's a lot
more to learn!
In fact, this article
itself has been an exercise in fitting tons of information into
a relatively small space! Writing sales copy, designing banner
ads, writing powerful classified ads, putting together an effective
newsletter subscription offer... these are all topics that I've
devoted entire lessons (i.e. hundreds of pages) to in my Insider
Secrets course.
However, now that
you have some of the basics under your belt, you should be able
to start making dramatic improvements to your
short copy... improvements that will attract a much bigger response
and increased sales! If all your copy is written with the rules
of benefits, audience, calls to action, and layout in mind,
you simply can't lose.
And remember: no
amount of copy is so small that it can be overlooked…
every link, button, banner, and classified ad is either making
or breaking your marketing campaign as we speak!
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